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#1 Fee

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 01:13 PM

This is a little poemy thing, of something I've dealt with a lot recently.I'm not doing any fancy formats or anything. Right now, I don't care if the spelling isn't right, or the grammar isn't either, maybe I'll change it later, but right now, these are just my feelings.



So many times,
yet I'm still crying?
All these things,
yet it still happens.
I cry and I beat myself up,
thinking,
"If only I had done better."
I gets tiring,
for it to happen so much.
Saying sorry doesn't help either,
If you really were,
then why do it?
It would help, if just once,
When I try for something I really want,
I got accpeted.
But that'll never happens,
cause all I ever feel is Rejection.

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 01:46 PM

Wow. For a poem lacking a format and a couple of spelling errors thrown in, I am impressed.

Your poem speaks well to me about how life feels for you. This feeling is quite easy for people to relate to because everyone has experienced this at least once before. Your words are strong because they reach out to others. And for those of whom are also feeling this way, it's like saying they're not alone in their rejection.

You've done good, Fee. You've done good. :P

And I do hope that you feel better soon and will no longer feel 'rejected'. :)

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 02:10 PM

Christopher, you don't know how your comment made me feel. No one really ever actually complement me in a detailed way. Thank you so much.

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 05:04 PM

Christopher, you don't know how your comment made me feel. No one really ever actually complement me in a detailed way. Thank you so much.


You're very welcome. It was a well-deserved compliment. :)

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 05:49 PM

wow you must be going through a tough time, I hope you feel better soon. If you don't mind sharing I am curious as to what it is that has you down.

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Posted 11 May 2011 - 06:14 PM

I really identify with this poem. However it's more of the 'got rejected from the NT' type than 'my boyfriend broke up with me.'

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 01:25 PM

Its a mixture of both....But, I'v never had a boyfriend.

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 03:13 PM

Its a mixture of both....But, I'v never had a boyfriend.


Me neither, but I've had my fair share of NT rejections.

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Posted 12 May 2011 - 03:47 PM

Aww, my twin (hehe). I like the poem but I'm sad you feel this way.

I like how it doesn't rhyme but when you read it you kind of got the flow going on where it all goes together great. I don't know if you want advice or anything, but like it's a little vague and when I read poems I like to get down and personal. So even though you tell how your feeling, I like to know the background of it, like why and etc. BUT that's just me.

I love it though. So don't take it as I don't. =P




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