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#1 Spherical Ice

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Posted 07 June 2011 - 10:38 AM

I've dreamt of a place,
Of jelly, t'was made,
Big blobs gave chase,
With a Chomby they played.

And in this place,
Was half-eaten jelly.
Which filled up the space.
Of my petpet's small belly.

And I have had dreams,
Where Chias team up,
For the Practice Teams,
In the Altador Cup.

And through fields of lava,
Jelly and heat,
A Blumaroo ran,
To avoid being meat.

You'll knock this off,
As fiction, I know.
You may laugh or scoff,
But I've walked through jell-o.

#2 neviklink

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Posted 07 June 2011 - 05:30 PM

Nice Poem too bad this will happen *Meepits drag off Spherical Ice's poem then beat him up* :Jellymeepit:

#3 Reiner

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Posted 07 June 2011 - 09:39 PM

I LOVE IT!!! Reminds me of Jelly Worl-*is dragged away by meepits*

#4 Spherical Ice

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Posted 07 June 2011 - 11:00 PM

Whew, I had another dream where you guys said I was talking about Jelly World. Like I said, this place is a /dream/. Not real. Ha. Pft. As if. Yeah. Uh-huh. Nope. Meep?

#5 Dark Heric

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Posted 12 June 2011 - 10:41 PM

Nice, That was funny. kinda reminds me of- Don't say it don't say it don't say it

#6 Ronin Ezekiel

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Posted 14 June 2011 - 06:46 PM

Jelly world I- *is dragged away by meepits*




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