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#1 Rain or Star

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Posted 20 September 2011 - 05:38 AM

I just recently started using Paint.NET and using layers and all that. I'm actually quite proud of the result. I used a mouse to make this (mainly curved lines) I'm not so sure about the highlight on the hair, perhaps any suggestions about that? Please give me your honest opinion :) And tell me where I could improve. Thank you!

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Posted 20 September 2011 - 06:42 AM

I think she looks quite good! Maybe if you did a bigger version of her whole body, that would be interesting.

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Posted 21 September 2011 - 07:52 PM

Suggestions: Not much, but the ears could of been longer by the way.
In other terms, it's pretty good, but rather slim-looking. 8 out of 10 from me.

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Posted 23 September 2011 - 09:49 AM

It would be better if her ears were more curved and wavy looking. And there's nothing wrong with making your pets look slim in pictures, people like to make their pets human-like.

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Posted 23 September 2011 - 11:09 AM

I'll give that a 7/10. -1 Point for the full body thing. -1 Point for the ears thing. -1 Point because I feel you can put some more shading in there.

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Posted 23 September 2011 - 10:39 PM

I am making the full body thing (This is my second try, I tried one and totally forgot to save) and I'll make all the changes everyone said I should too! Thank you for helping me! :)

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Posted 24 September 2011 - 01:52 AM

I am making the full body thing (This is my second try, I tried one and totally forgot to save) and I'll make all the changes everyone said I should too! Thank you for helping me! :)


You're very welcome. It's always nice to see some nice new art.

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Posted 24 September 2011 - 01:59 AM

When is it going to be shown? I'd like to see it.

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Posted 24 September 2011 - 01:40 PM

She is so pretty! I really like the hair.



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Posted 29 September 2011 - 04:21 AM

I'm working on the picture, hopefully it'll be done soon (you can probably tell that I'm pretty lazy ;_; )

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