[Rain or Star]

I just recently started using Paint.NET and using layers and all that. I'm actually quite proud of the result. I used a mouse to make this (mainly curved lines) I'm not so sure about the highlight on the hair, perhaps any suggestions about that? Please give me your honest opinion :) And tell me where I could improve. Thank you!

http://itsapoptropicablog.files.wordpress.com/2011/09/lisdella1-1.png?w=218&h=300

[Heart Shaped Box]

I think she looks quite good! Maybe if you did a bigger version of her whole body, that would be interesting.

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Suggestions: Not much, but the ears could of been longer by the way.
In other terms, it's pretty good, but rather slim-looking. 8 out of 10 from me.

[Heart Shaped Box]

It would be better if her ears were more curved and wavy looking. And there's nothing wrong with making your pets look slim in pictures, people like to make their pets human-like.

[Scintilli]

I'll give that a 7/10. -1 Point for the full body thing. -1 Point for the ears thing. -1 Point because I feel you can put some more shading in there.

[Rain or Star]

I am making the full body thing (This is my second try, I tried one and totally forgot to save) and I'll make all the changes everyone said I should too! Thank you for helping me! :)

[Scintilli]

Rain or Star, on 23 September 2011 - 10:39 PM, said:

I am making the full body thing (This is my second try, I tried one and totally forgot to save) and I'll make all the changes everyone said I should too! Thank you for helping me! :)

You're very welcome. It's always nice to see some nice new art.

[Heart Shaped Box]

When is it going to be shown? I'd like to see it.

[milaza]

She is so pretty! I really like the hair.

[Rain or Star]

I'm working on the picture, hopefully it'll be done soon (you can probably tell that I'm pretty lazy ;_; )

This post has been edited by Rain or Star: 29 September 2011 - 04:22 AM